No hope, No way further
None to give a hand, None to stand with
The only thing I get is 'ADVICE'
Try to understand me...
NO, you listen to me
Let me explain...
NO, I don’t want to know
Let me talk...
NO, do as I say
Ok, what you want me to do,
Do as you like..!!
Standing alone
Don’t know what to do
Nothing to say
Even if there is something...
No use
I found a way
Every one is happy now
Lots of people are there Thinking of me.
Just because I agreed “Everything is my Mistakes”
No I shouldn’t let myself down
life has its ups and downs
relations are made on earth
let me live
None to give a hand, None to stand with
The only thing I get is 'ADVICE'
Try to understand me...
NO, you listen to me
Let me explain...
NO, I don’t want to know
Let me talk...
NO, do as I say
Ok, what you want me to do,
Do as you like..!!
Standing alone
Don’t know what to do
Nothing to say
Even if there is something...
No use
I found a way
Every one is happy now
Lots of people are there Thinking of me.
Just because I agreed “Everything is my Mistakes”
No I shouldn’t let myself down
life has its ups and downs
relations are made on earth
let me live
©fayaz
5 comments:
A very good one..You are a good poet.Sensible poetry!
extra sensitive :-)
Hey Fayas,
Very glad to see your poem..
Very nice creation...
I don't want you to be alone..
I'd like to be with you all the time
Mandhabudhi
Forgive me if it hurts you, but i made some changes to your poem.
No hope, no respite
Dark clouds pile on with no silver lining
No shoulder, No kind words
All I hear is Censuring
Try to understand me...
NO, you listen to me
Let me explain...
NO, I don’t want to know
Let me talk...
NO, do as I say
Ok, what you want me to do,
Do as you like..!!
The road i want to take renders me helpless and friendless
So i turned back and walked the path everybody wanted me to
Today I stand not alone, amongst beaming faces
Proud to be a part of my life
But why do i find myself lonelier than before
Living a life that does not seem like mine.
Please do keep writing!
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